When I was a child, my cousin, who was of the same age, died of a particularly vicious flu. This case, however trivial it may sound, impressed me so greatly that I decided to connect my life with medicine when I grow up, so that I would be able to study the disease, understand how it functions and, probably, will be able to save somebody else from undergoing the same experience. By the time I reached high school, this resolution became rather lukewarm, but still I tried to apply it to several biology and medical clubs; and, surprisingly, it turned out that my early decision was completely correct, for biology and medicine became the subjects that I enjoyed particularly throughout my high school years.
No matter what social networks they use, teenagers are exposed to the same dangers. Remember that social networks are never related to the actual reality. Instead, they allow you to see what others want you to see. Unfortunately, what you see is usually far from the reality. This is one of the main minuses of online interactions. Plenty of people hide their actual identities behind some screens. At some point, the actual communication goes in the wrong direction. The same rule applies to the actual relationship. Whether you make a new friend or you talk to someone you have not seen in a while, chances are you will be introduced to a completely different person.
As is the case with any assessment task, I am looking for evidence you have learned something from the lectures, tutes and required reading. The lack of any in-text citations and references is an indication that the concepts we learned about during the semester have not been incorporated or discussed to the expected extent. For a (minimum) 1000 word essay you needed to consult at least 5 high-quality, rigorous academic sources, . peer-reviewed academic journal articles, books from academic publishers, not merely one source (a non-academic online definition of disequilibrium). A reflective essay deviates from typical academic writing because it invites you to use your own experiences and perceptions as evidence. However, this reflective task still requires you to select and interpret evidence according to academic standards. You should have cited secondary sources of adequate scholarly quality and of sufficient number to support your ideas. Engaging with academic literature in this way would have demonstrated that your business ideas are grounded in a sound understanding of relevant theory. From an academic, university writing perspective, your business idea needs a stronger basis in economic theory. You have also not mentioned the key challenges you need to overcome in order to succeed. Business startups require a plan/goal of what they want to achieve within a specified time frame, . year 1 identify and target market, expand customer base by means of... etc.